LOGOS
Mum, Dad
i have come here to convince you to let me be able to watch TV during the week.
First of all it is proven that some TV during the week can be good for a child in adolesence. It can help with eye sight problems and can improve your eye sight a lot. OK thats probably not true, but it is true that TV can be a great stress reliever. All my friends get to watch TV plus there are some educational channels that i could watch. As well as educational channels theres the news channels which could keep me posted on whats going on in the world, and whats happening.
so all i ask is that i get to watch TV during the week after i have finished all of my work.
ETHOS
parent
i would and i would think i deserve at least one hour a day to watch TV at night.
i think i deserve it. i deserve it because i do my homework every night, im on top of my assinments, i do chores, i help out around the house a lot, ive done everything i needed to before i go to bed and at night ive got nothing to do because ive finished everything. all i say is for everything i do i think i could at least get a little credit for the things i do.
so those are some of the reasons i think i should be able to watch TV at night.
PATHOS
Father, Mother
i would like to be able to watch TV during the week. first of all how would you like it if you couldn't watch TV during the week? how would you like it if you had nothing to do during the week? how would you like it if you were stressed out about school and had nothing to releive that stress? all i say it please and that ill work even harder at school.
thanks.
I like The logos one because it has some interesting facts and come on I was convinced after the first sentence
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